Wind

She was wild
the windows broke open
the candles snuffed

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Categories: Haiku, Poetry

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13 replies

  1. This is a short but interesting piece of poetry.

  2. This is a short but interesting piece of poetry.

  3. This could really be taken more than one way.  I like it!

  4. Beautifully concise 

  5. This is sexy.

  6. Heart of a woman is always complex and bears different meanings, like your haiko. Good one:)

  7. Wow — makes me want to know the rest of the story.

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