Wind

She was wild
the windows broke open
the candles snuffed

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13 Comments Add yours

  1. emmaspringer says:

    This is a short but interesting piece of poetry.

  2. emmaspringer says:

    This is a short but interesting piece of poetry.

  3. Jingle says:

    love it.

  4. Eric Alder says:

    This could really be taken more than one way.  I like it!

  5. jackcrimson666 says:

    Beautifully concise 

  6. Bohemian Housewren says:

    This is sexy.

  7. Booguloo says:

    Nice Haiku

  8. Anna :o] says:

    Very nice.

    Anna :o]

  9. deeju says:

    Heart of a woman is always complex and bears different meanings, like your haiko. Good one:)

  10. Elizabeth C says:

    Wow — makes me want to know the rest of the story.

  11. Very nicely written 🙂

  12. Beloved49 says:

    Another nice one.

    Melanie

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