As the last ray of sun leaves the earth
Behind it should go all stress of the day
As you hold the night like a baby in your hand
And watch it grow through the cocktail glass
You should be Immersed in the music of love
Then light a candle and let it burn
As the world slowly dips in the dark
You should see her face glow on you
Take a sip from her glass
And give her a sip from your glass
Wait for the night to age to perfection
And then tell her how much you love
Categories: Free Verse, Life, Life and Happiness, Love, Love and Relationships, Passion, Poetry
Vinod Narayan 
lovely,
hold night like a babay, smiles, love the line.
🙂
I find sunset a thought provoking time.Lovely imagery.
How perfectly romantic. Yes, you should!
Cheers to that mate! Nicely put together…
here’s me this week: http://manojramani.com/?p=517
beautiful….thats how our nite shud end.
my link:http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/10/words-i-couldnt-say.html
Lovely. this is a very thoughtful piece. I love how you love ‘Her’
A beautiful and romantic pace of poetry!
thanks for share …
http://maysoona.blogspot.com/2011/10/immersed-in-love.html
love the imagery of this one, well done.
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