The dog and the elephant – 365 Flash Fiction #53

“Dad” She asked him
“Yes dear” he replied
“Can Dogs and elephants be friends?” She asked pointing at the picture on the wall
He looked at the picture; it also said it was drawn by a fifth grader.
“Very nice” He thought
He looked at his daughter and said “Sure they can but why do you ask?”
She walked closer to the picture and said
“But they are so different. The dog is small and the elephant is so big” she gestured big with her tiny hands.
He smiled and said “Who told you that friends have to be alike?”
“I don’t know. I thought so because all my friends are like me; small and fun and your friends are all grownups and boring” She said
He looked at her surprised “Isn’t aunt Mary your friend?; what about mama and me?” He asked
“Yes Aunt Mary is my friend” she said with a sparkle in her eyes that usually comes just with the thought of Aunt Mary. She continued “But you and mom are my parents”

“As parents can’t we be your friends?” He asked her now kneeling down next to her and hugging her
“I can make you my friend, but I thought you don’t want to, I thought you only wanted to tell me what is good and bad” He looked away and continued “My friends play with me always and they don’t get cell phone calls during the play”
Just then the phone rang and she looked at him.

He smiled and picked up the phone and said “Sorry Jane, that can wait, I am with my best friend now and we are planning to go to a park and play on the swing for one hour. Please ask them to wait till then”
He said thank you and slipped his phone back to his pocket.
He looked at her and they both laughed and walked out and walked towards the park


12 Comments Add yours

  1. A nice story and a lesson for young and old alike!

  2. Bodhirose says:

    I very sweet story with a very important message in there!

    Gayle ~

  3. Lovely piece very sweet 

  4. Mish says:

    I think that he sent a wonderful message to his daughter … this is priceless !

  5. Thanks All Appreciate your comments

  6. Jingle says:

    realistic and smart one, true, parents are all business, yet friends of children are pure ans golden.

  7. Kesaiserris says:

    Such a touching and sweet story =)

  8. A.B. Thomas says:

    nicely done, I enjoyed the write!

  9. easdemers says:

    Wonderful lesson for the child and the dad!! 🙂

  10. PremI says:

    Valuable message…very well written.
    Still smiling!

  11. short story slam says:

    what an amazing story, you truly got the talent.

    keep it up.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s